Monday, 6 September 2010

Welcome Message

Hello my name is Sky, and welcome to my blog. I can speak Japanese, Cantonese and English, because I'm Japanese and Cantonese mix, and I learning English in school. This blog is for school learning, and this is for homework, I use blog for learning something i don't know, because blog is easier to know the thing i don't know.

3 comments:

  1. Sky, good work getting your blog off the ground. Can you tell me more about how a blog can help you to become a better learner? Please try and read through your work aloud, and look for any errors (such as "i" instead of "I"). Think carefully about your last sentence: I think I know what you are trying to say, but I think it could be clearer.

    Your Library Thing widget looks good, but it is a little wide for the sidebar. Can you make the sidebar wide enough to fit the widget?

    How are you getting on choosing and embedding a YouTube video? Remember, as well as embedding it you need to write a little about why you chose it and what you have learned from it.

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  2. Sky, Your blog is very good but remember fix your capital letter i needs to be I. You might want to think about your last sentence.

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  3. Your Blog looks good but you need more writing. You should add more posts.

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