IL presentation (Why does everyone want this pen)

Why does everyone want this pen? Because this pen looks cool, useful and it user-friendly that's why everyone wants this pen. We are aiming to teenager, little kids, old people, businessman, designer, and a lot of worker because this pen can support their job by using this pen. Example, normally pen has pen and eraser or highlighter at the back of the pen. That normally what’s pen has, but we add a lot of stuff to support their jobs. We add a lot of stuff on the pen, like are whiteout, ruler sticky tape, and a lot of stuff on that pen. That can supports your job a lot, because when you holding one our pen, that just like you are holding a pencil case, because that pen has a lot of function, but this pen is not too big and not too heavy. That is the good point of our pen. So I think a lot of people will want this pen or try this pen. If one student in the school has this pen, everyone also want this pen, because it cool and it useful. Examples like are Iphone. Everyone wants this phone because it looks cool, very expensive and a lot of people are using this, and more reason because Apple makes this. If the Iphone is not makes by the Apple, I think not many people will want the Iphone. This pen is good at not heavy and not expensive. Thank-you.